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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Continuous Poem Nov 23 2008, 10:39 AM

Anyone bothered about making a poem between all of us? You know I post a line, then someone else etc. I'm not too bothered about the structure as long as the last word rhymes. "Footsteps crunch in the soft snow"

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Vybz
Posts: 1470

Jun 02 2009, 09:43 AM

Dismiss my heart and love's first kiss
Dismissed all my joy and bliss
Dismissed all happy thought
Now i am left here to rot

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Jun 02 2009, 09:45 AM

Rotting inside yet my heart still bleeds The love I feel, it still feeds With this hate in my soul I walk below Death has taken my spirit whole

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Vybz
Posts: 1470

Jun 02 2009, 09:53 AM

Wholly spirit taken be
Now i rest eternally
Time alone cannot expel
The painful terrors of a living hell 

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Jun 02 2009, 10:16 AM

In death I still feel the pain inside Too soon I came to my eternal demise Never again shall I speak one lie Tomorrow I shall see myself die Never again to see my loves last reply

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Vybz
Posts: 1470

Jun 02 2009, 10:27 AM

But why seek reply of that love
When there is still hope above
To live again i will try
I must defeat my demise
Tomorrow shall come another time
That i may open up my eyes.

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Jun 02 2009, 11:31 AM

The time has come to defeat the lies Now has gone my eternal demise Together we live never despised Never again to speak any lies

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Vybz
Posts: 1470

Jun 02 2009, 11:54 AM

As i lay, eyes wide awake
I ask for life for my own sake
Like the executed on the stake
my final fate i now await

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Jun 02 2009, 12:52 PM

The pain is over I am now awake From now on I shall forsake Never again shall I wake From dreams alone which are fake

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Vybz
Posts: 1470

Jun 02 2009, 07:28 PM

Dreams are  not what i fear
But loosing which i hold so dear
Fighting all my silent fears
Taking more than i can bear
Cradled by my blood and tears

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Jun 03 2009, 03:30 AM

Forever in eternal sorrow Wishing that there was no tomorrow Never again sort to borrow My hearts own fears I wish were on the morrow* *(short for tomorrow (has been used by others & is not made up))

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Vybz
Posts: 1470

Jun 03 2009, 08:45 AM

Tomorrow comes tomorrow goes
When the pain stops nobody knows
Round and round my head it spins
Pains it stings like needles and pins
But in tine this pain will end
When i can find happiness again
And cut down sorrow from its reign

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Jun 03 2009, 08:50 AM

the friends we make wont always stay but never again will my heart feel pain the love of others feels so good I will stop hiding behind this hood

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Vybz
Posts: 1470

Jun 03 2009, 10:31 AM

Under this hood will not hide me from hateful eyes

Nor will it prevent me form my imminent demise

No one hears my muffled cries

All around me are hateful eyes

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Jun 03 2009, 10:42 AM

Hateful eyes which burn my soul Happiness will never be known Here after tears will not drone I am stronger than I have ever known

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ava
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Jun 03 2009, 11:23 AM

stronger than u cud ever imagine

u love for others well being has such passion

my heart crys when u r hurt

this pain cudn't get any worse

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Jun 03 2009, 11:36 AM

but light is at the end of time I am fine and proud of what is mine from now on I will be fine Never to envy what is not mine

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Vybz
Posts: 1470

Jun 03 2009, 11:45 AM

Not having ones desires is like a curse

Its like riding in your hearse

What could hurt more than unrequited love

Its like tribulation from above

Flying free like a dove

Ive touched the sky and found my love

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ava
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Jun 03 2009, 12:23 PM

my love betrays me and leaves me hurt and open

no prince to save my heart in a fluid motion

why should there be i am not worth loving

tears fall from my eyes in shame of coveting

his touch his kiss his hands are not mine

yet i want them need them to make it through this hard time

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Jun 03 2009, 12:44 PM

this love is just a marriage hearse my life is just one big curse never again to see things diverse see things only as crap i dont feel just lay there flat never again to see things fat I end it all along side a cat (reference to The Black Cat - Edgar Allen Poe)

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Vybz
Posts: 1470

Jun 03 2009, 02:10 PM

But my friends soon you will find
That love is something so divine
Open your heart and set it free
And you will find the person with whom you are meant to be

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