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Emocentric
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Thank you for the bullets. Mar 09 2009, 01:32 PM

there's nothing, for when i wear my heart on my sleeve,
no one can save me now
this pain, is all i get when i care for you this much,
and you throw it in my face
to be alone, is what i long for when my heart starts to fall,
and break on the cold stone floor


thank you for the bullets, that i long for this day
they take away the shit, that is in my life
and my heart will cease to hurt n more
when my brain hits the sides of the closing walls
dont you be sad, ill be fine in the afterlife
and this pain you caused, will not make my spirit fall


the bullets, are what i want to end the pain thats inside,
i dont want it there no more
the fragments, of my brain are falling down from the sky,
onto the cold stone floor
the blackness, of my blood in the dark moonlight,
its the same as your black heart

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18315

Mar 09 2009, 06:30 PM

All I can say is brilliant!

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xxkillxmexslowlyxx
Posts: 22

Mar 11 2009, 03:33 AM

It's breathtaking, I write alot too; and I admire your freestyle type of writing. Excellent, check out some of mine and tell me what ya think,,.,0kies?


~<3~
Morgan Lynn

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Mar 17 2009, 01:37 PM

This poem is full of passion and feeling, you have done yourself proud, poems like this are masterpieces and should be etched upon the soul.

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hopelessly_in_love
Posts: 3

Apr 13 2009, 07:54 PM

that was so beautiful i cried. wow what a poet.

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