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Emo Pictures - Pagan
Pagan
Posts: 606
chocolate buttons Apr 24 2009, 02:42 AM

this is my first attempt so here goes

She sits in a room all alone with chocolate buttons melting on her wrist,<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />

This was once a happy girl with no worries so what happened her love went,

Her mom got scared, her dad left,

Now she sits all alone with chocolate buttons melting on her wrist,

Why I hear her cry in her sleep shes lost her identity everyone has gone,

Now she sits all alone with chocolate buttons melting on her wrist,

She walks down stairs feeling faint she walks into the room her moms there with someone new,

Now she sits all alone with chocolate buttons melting on her wrist,

The person has got his hands on her leg the girl looks confused at the stranger,

Now she sits all alone with chocolate buttons melting on her wrist,

Her mom pushes the hand away the girl leaves back to the room she stays,

Now she sits all alone with chocolate buttons melting on her wrist,

Her mom gets worried looks upstairs the girl is gone the buttons are everywhere,

Now the mom is in a state more buttons are spilled the girls now sit in hell,

Now they sits all alone with chocolate buttons melting on there wrists.

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Apr 24 2009, 04:54 PM
Yea it's pretty good and interesting. I guess it could flow better but that's just my opinion and as you say it's your first try.
Emo Pictures - Pagan
Pagan
Posts: 606
Apr 27 2009, 03:18 AM
awww thanks i try *smiles*

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