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I hold your letter in my frozen hands, the last line was long, as long as it hurts my love carries on. With every word another feeling dies I'm left here in the dark, no memories of you, I close my eyes, It's killing me... Love is Dead, by Tokio Hotel

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Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1470
The four walls May 30 2009, 12:13 PM


Creeping, crawling, the noise draws closer



Darkness encloses around me, I'm alone



There is only one door, one door to salvation



But I'm slow and the door get further and further away



In the darkness beyond the door there are eyes



Eyes of hate and despise, stopping me from finding this
release



 



I want to be with everyone else, I want to be heard



Being a lone just brings hurt



I need to find a way out, out of this darkness



But the eyes behind the door are as dark as these four falls
around me



The acceptance I seek might just be darkness too



And the people on the other side might just hurt me



 



I think it's just best I stay alone



These four walls have always been my home



Self loathing, pain, sorrow and loneliness are their names



These are the only names I know I will never let them go



 



I don't want to go outside with those dark and deadly eyes



I am tired of this hurt and deception



In this dark room, I am trapped but I have protection



Protection from the worldly hurt protection form things
getting worse



 



Beyond the door there is a light, which to get I must fight



For happiness does not always come easy, sometimes it's a
fight



A fight through the hurt and pain, so that I may smile once
again.



Through the pain and hurt I rise, and crush the walls of
demise



Through the door I run not looking back not even once



And finally I find the eternal happiness all that once



 



My friends learn form me, you must not suffer pain eternally



To find true happiness is a journey but it's worth it



One day you will be able to hold your head up high



One day you will be able to touch the sky



But through it all you will find,



That where there is pain there is happiness on the
other side

Stephonz May 30 2009

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Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546
May 30 2009, 12:28 PM
great work hun... maybe you could get some published in a book or paper
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1470
May 30 2009, 12:34 PM
yea ..just maybe, i going to get some poets to read my work and see what happens. Poetry just flows through me i can write about alot of stuff. lol i was thinking of writing a poem about breakfast since i seem to be eating it all the time.
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546
May 30 2009, 12:50 PM
If you want my mum knows the former poet of Newport, I could ask her to get him to look
Emo Pictures - ava
ava
Posts: 45
May 30 2009, 05:28 PM

A. did u say mum????!!!!! OMG that is freakin rad!!!!

B.u shud sooo take his offer babe!!!!!

Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1470
May 30 2009, 07:24 PM
o that's cool i already got an editor though,sigh... my poetry is becoming more than just  freedom of expression i gotta copy right my work wherever i put, now i got an editor, o well..
Emo Pictures - ava
ava
Posts: 45
May 30 2009, 07:32 PM
a step in the rite direction:]
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546
May 31 2009, 08:39 AM
something to live for
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
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May 31 2009, 08:51 AM
I know someone who had a book published as a teenager here in the UK. Took a lot of effort but he made it :)
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1470
May 31 2009, 02:33 PM
ill just have to see what the future has in store for me, one thing i know is that it all started here :)
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546
Jun 01 2009, 04:29 AM
& we all appreciate your work
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1470
Jun 01 2009, 06:00 PM
thx a lot ... my friends don't really understand the depth of my poetry like you guys do.. you are really a special bunch, it feels good to be able to express myself  while others relate and enjoy at the same time.

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