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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Love of a stranger Aug 05 2009, 12:44 PM

We never met you yet we fell in love, We never spoke but I heard your voice, We never kissed yet I felt your breath, You changed my life, you're my success, Every night my dreams are full, I imaging you, truth be-told, You hold my hand as I grasp yours, I stare at you and beauty behold, The things I feel are like nothing before, I hope this feeling never hits the floor, Or my life may just walk out the door, For I am yours forever more. I havn't wrote in a while but I'm trying to start again, I can only hope they get better from here, I hope you enjoyed it. You can see more of my work and others at /Amateur Poetry. Enjoy.

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 05 2009, 12:46 PM

Wow, that was.....wow. Dude im speechless, yet the weird thing is i feel like i would write this...for you. :?

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Aug 05 2009, 12:54 PM

Glad you like it hun but I fear it's not as good as my previous work. Glad you can relate. :)

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 05 2009, 01:02 PM

Your worse than me, i think one day you will be proud of a poem your wrote, one you think is your best. But it will never be good enough because YOU wrote it, its YOU work. Do you understand what im saying. xxxx

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Aug 05 2009, 01:06 PM

I understand, like I think all my websites are crap except my free mobile downloads one. In my eyes I will never be what I expect but in my eyes you are a hell of a lot as you are one of my best friends and we talk a lot. Basically in your own eyes you are less but others you are more than you appear to be. I blabber on.

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 05 2009, 01:16 PM

All your websites are amazing but like we both explained neither of us will admit that about ourselves. Yeah your write i can sit there and feel shit and useless when others might disagree. But i think your amzin, awesome and true but to you thats just my opinion because like many others thats not the person you see staring back at you in the mirror

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 05 2009, 01:23 PM

In the mirror I see a stranger...

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 05 2009, 01:41 PM

In the mirror i see my worst enemy....

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Aug 06 2009, 04:46 AM

Your enemy can always become your friend, it just takes time and understanding.

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 06 2009, 10:23 AM

Its hard though because it hurts to look soo how can you understand someone you cant make eye contact with?

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Aug 06 2009, 10:43 AM

It's hard to explain but, you can understand and never look. Believe me I have more than once, besides you always got someone to do it with you hun.

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 06 2009, 11:26 AM

Yeah I guess so :) And surprisingly i understood every word you just said lol

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Aug 06 2009, 11:32 AM

As long as one of us does lol xx

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XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272

Aug 21 2009, 01:52 PM

really awsome.. love this piece... :) i wld love u to read some of my stuff on here and see wat u think...if u want.. :)

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LipsOfDeceit
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Aug 21 2009, 04:38 PM

rely good work i mean rely good work :D

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