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I hope you choke on those words that kiss that bottle Tell that mick he just made..., by Fall Out Boy

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-Peices-of-Me-
Posts: 42
Fairytale Ashes Aug 05 2009, 03:08 PM
it was the summer you got close to me we jumped the gate and we were free hand in hand lips to lips our whole lives started with that kiss our own fairytale book and the words you took and suddenly you and me belonged first kiss in the rain no other kiss the same your the reason i lose control and thats the chapter the summer turned cold cause she's the reason i had to let go i live my life in a nightmare my fairytale ashes in the air i breathe it in but i choke i try to stand and i fold i want to breathe without breathing in blood i start to cry and i start the flood i hold the steel sharp on skin i try to keep you out but you keep getting in your phone rings in the middle of the night (sorry babe i tried to do whats right) they want to ask you about this girl you lied to them told them i was your world sorry son she lost her life to the rusted blade of a kitchen knife but she left a letter here for you says " tell me what else i couldnt do" you know much about this boy? but the phone is dead theres no noise and he swings from the roof just like a toy he lived his life in a nightmare his fairytale ashes in the air he breathed it in he coughed he choked he tried to stand he could only fold he could never breathe without choking on blood when he cried he started a flood the rope is taut the rope is tight he thought she knew she was his life. two bodies burried side by side the broken boy and his fairytale wife inscripted on the grave pastor read two teenagers who lost their heads forgot about their real lives and now they're fairytale ashes side by side.

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Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1470
Aug 05 2009, 03:45 PM
morbid .. deep .. i pictured the whole thing while i read it nice :)
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546
Aug 06 2009, 04:52 AM
I love it hun, got my crying. This is great work any chance I can publish it? if so what name would you like as the author?

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