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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

the way Aug 13 2009, 03:12 AM

I love it when i hear your voice and when you look into my eyes The way you make my heart just stop and how all the hatred dies The music i hear inside my ears when you put your lips to mine and the way you make my knees go weak The way you do that every time. the way i know you'd die for me and how id die for you the way i love you acessively and the way you love me to. The way my heart broke in two when a man pushed you down to the floor i saw the light drown out your eyes and i knew you would be kissing me no more. the way it tore my life apart and the memories that kept playing the times you said you'd die for me and how the times, just weren't changing the way i'd die for you just as much and how i cant bare to be without you one last breathe and im pulling the trigger Iloveyou. Iloveyoutoo.

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LipsOfDeceit
Posts: 2174

Aug 13 2009, 08:11 AM

another great poem well done :]

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Vybz
Posts: 1470

Aug 13 2009, 08:16 AM

sweet , touching ^^

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Aug 14 2009, 06:19 AM

Love it hun The Way is another great piece of work!!! Published for you ^ just click The Way

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18262

Aug 14 2009, 10:00 AM

I like it and that's as extended as my answer will get at the moment (had a stressful day)

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Pagan
Posts: 606

Aug 14 2009, 01:31 PM

i like that...no love that

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DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184

Aug 14 2009, 02:11 PM

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 15 2009, 05:46 AM

Glads you people like it, its probably the best i wrote in a long time but i like it too :) Maybe it is possible to like your own stuff vhris, you just gotta write the right one :)

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DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184

Aug 15 2009, 06:16 PM

I'm sorry but this is just soooo...*refrains*

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 16 2009, 12:41 AM

Go away dude. Stop pissing people oof. I mean, give honest critism but do it without the patrnising attitude maybe.

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DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184

Aug 16 2009, 02:45 AM

Do you even know how to write a sentence properly?

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 16 2009, 03:53 AM

Im sorry im not as good at spelling as you tosser.

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Total Forum Posts: 11

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