Emo Scene Community

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

It's a song but... Devils Stick Sep 01 2009, 05:34 AM

The sun steams through the blinds unchanged, My mind just wanders to the many shades, There's nothing left but our love now But our lives unchanged (Our lives Unchanged_) --- --- I watch your eyes, So deep in my mind, All I can see is your beauty sublime, My hearts just beating out of time, These feelings for you should just be a crime -- -- To leave you would just be sick, All of those ex's, they just seem so thick, Their names engraved on the devils stick, They must have been some kind of stupid hick, (So thick. Some hick) -- -- Your beauty inside just blinds my soul, Being with you there's nowhere I wont go, You're skin is as soft as snow, (I love you so) From here where do we go? To own you there is no quid pro quo, -- -- -- -- -- -- Forever in my heart you know, Love you so, Soft as snow, Nowhere I wont go, My love shall flow, Your angelic glow, Together we'll defeat your foe__ --

Cancel

Replies

Total Forum Posts: 2

CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Sep 01 2009, 01:07 PM

wow, ive been writing songs for a while and have written and read many in a few years. This is one of the best i think ive read so far. Good stucture and meaning (:

Cancel

xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Sep 02 2009, 04:19 AM

Thanks hun but it's not that good x

Cancel

Total Forum Posts: 2

Add Reply

Featured Users View More

• InTheShadows

  22/Female/US

• Avalanche

  22/Nonbinary/US

• Xolivia-von-sodomyX

  29/Female/US

• xXjuli666cupidXx

  21/Female/US

• iwrestledabearonce

  13/Male/US

• Scye

  23/Male/US

• ToxicXDxvil

  20/Male/US

• Jayhatespeople

  18/Nonbinary/US