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Let it all burn, I will burn first God I've tried, am I lost in your eyes? Just let me burn It's what I deserve, God I've lied, am I lost in your eyes? Paradise Lost, by Hollywood Undead

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Emo Pictures - jadey
jadey
Posts: 20
deranged Sep 05 2009, 07:38 AM
im broken, beyond repair and far from pretty imagination... a heart that is crushed into bits.., in a body that couldn't seem to fit... My whole is in half and my half wasnt worth a try.. In a world of fools, every one seems to lie.. Im a deranged soul in the making, hatred and greed are for the taking.. For i had been wronged once more, yet i can't find revenge just like before... I found myself hanging, between the doors of despair and dying, So I sucked fo air but had nothing... ...all i have is a broken body and a deranged soul from the beginning..

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Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546
Sep 05 2009, 09:39 AM
I can so relate.... Great work xx
Emo Pictures - sullen_gnome
sullen_gnome
Posts: 182
Sep 10 2009, 05:30 PM
really really nice poem.. it really strike me.. excellent work!! lol
XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272
Sep 19 2009, 04:53 AM
beautiful piece.. so relaitable... well done..

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