Emo Scene Community

okay, so first of all, yes this is another one of those songs about a girl. dissapointing? hopfully not, because it took me awhile to write this. secondly i will take critizism, infact i encourage it! tell me what you think! I'll be the trees that shades the light that blinds your eyes, while your under your favorite tree trying to recollect I'll be the photographs, you love to look at. just to remember that long past memory though its not that great I'll be the stone you once had lain on, sketching pictures and taking photographs before you moved your home I'll be the voice convincing you to break your silent habit but you'll turn away When i see you there looking trough the glass there's a combanation of new love and an unforgiving past please my dear you you have to see your already in love with me When you smile i silently wish it was at me I wish you'd be there standing next to me whispering you loved me as i start to worry About what to expect from daily life in this new perspective breaking my routine I wish you'd be my sally, my pumpkin queen. i'd be your king in our fantasy You'd be the most stunning girl, i'd save the world from those evil things that haunt yuo in your sleep Lets take a train from here Leave past back home with fear i'll place my hand in yours like puzzle peices they won't fit any other way look into my eyes im begging for tonight to be the one where you leave home with me. okay, so there you go. Please please please comment! good or bad!