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Emo Pictures - xXEMO-DRUMMERXx
xXEMO-DRUMMERXx
Posts: 30
please come home...pain Mar 18 2010, 07:32 AM
this poem is really hard for me, its about my dad, and he died when i was six, i wrote this one about a week ago, hope you like it Skies of grey, just wanna say Life goes on, even though you’re gone So delicate like rain, you were in pain Too young to understand, “god” had another plan And it was 6 years gone so fast, wish time with you would’ve last You’d pick me up when I’d fall, back then I thought I had it all But now I know it was all for show, when “god” snatched you right from home The pain I feel will never end, gotta get back on my feet again When I was young I would beg Oh Daddy please come home today But back then I couldn’t understand, that death meant you weren’t coming back Gone so long I should have known, that you weren’t able to come back home But now when I go to your grave, keep thinking daddy wants me to be brave And I try to stay strong, but I can’t for long The pain I feel it cuts too deep, knowing you have eternal sleep And I always seem to break down and cry, keep asking Daddy why did you have to die And it was 6 years gone so fast, wish time with you would’ve last You’d pick me up when I’d fall, back then I thought I had it all But now I know it was all for show, when “god” snatched you right from home The pain I feel will never end, gotta get back on my feet again When I look up at the starry sky, asking questions and wondering why Why did it have to be you, why did you have to suffer through The pain, the tears all that time, though you’d always say that you were fine But I could see right through the lies, and I saw the pain that was in your eyes 10 years since you’ve been gone, I can’t believe it’s been so long I remember when I’d sit on your knee, hoping you would never leave And no one knows that I hide, the intense pain I feel inside The main thing that makes me cry, when I need you by my side And it was 6 years gone so fast, wish time with you would’ve last You’d pick me up when I’d fall, back then I thought I had it all But now I know it was all for show, when “god” snatched you right from home The pain I feel will never end, gotta get back on my feet again Though I’m still asking, Daddy please come home. <b>

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Emo Pictures - nikkiwest
nikkiwest
Posts: 2440
Mar 18 2010, 09:17 AM
thats a great poem nicely written nicely said
Emo Pictures - xXEMO-DRUMMERXx
xXEMO-DRUMMERXx
Posts: 30
Mar 18 2010, 10:47 AM
thanks
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18262
Mar 18 2010, 06:09 PM
Very touching and well written :)
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1470
Mar 20 2010, 05:17 AM
Indeed A touching poem.

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