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Do you feel like you're irrelevant? Do you feel like you're just scared as fuck? Mars, by Yungblud

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Emo Pictures - DiEiNgInSiDe
DiEiNgInSiDe
Posts: 108
Burn! Mar 22 2010, 03:19 PM
This is a bit of an angry poem, but its better for me to get my anger out tis way than any other way. it does burn, now it's my turn to make you burn, now it's my turn i'll watch you die, this was all a lie I'll set you on fire, i'm sick and tired your my worst nightmare, my heart i no longer share your the death of me, my happiness and love will no longer be i'm gunna make you burn, in this life it's now my turn your bringing back my past, this pain i feel will be the last the last you'll ever see, the last of me the end of a life, this hurts like a dull knife i thought you were the perfect dream, my love burns away in this firey steam i'll watch you as you burn in hell, in this dizzying world i stumbled then fell im breaking and burning inside, there's no reason left to hide my hate will never die, your love is a fucking lie it's my turn, to make you burn!

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Emo Pictures - brianna1196
brianna1196
Posts: 1
Mar 29 2010, 05:36 PM
damn gurl that is really wicked i like poems like that i will love to read another poem like that if u dont mind
Emo Pictures - xEvilEmox
xEvilEmox
Posts: 264
Mar 30 2010, 06:43 PM
It's so wonderfully expressive ! I know how that sort of Anger feels like... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Apr 20 2010, 05:08 PM
jw but is that based on real life or just something you wrote? i like it its very creative it shows wealths of emotion which is hard to do. great job! wicked pic xEvilEmox!
Emo Pictures - HardLifeDiary
HardLifeDiary
Posts: 62
Apr 23 2010, 09:18 AM
it's great but.. you could think of better words to put in the poem, that would fit better.. the spelling doesn't really fit.
Emo Pictures - DiEiNgInSiDe
DiEiNgInSiDe
Posts: 108
May 09 2010, 05:10 PM
xxsorrowfulsuicidexx its based on a real life. it perfectly explians how i was feeling when i wrote it and how i felt about the person of whom i was writing it about at that time. and thank you hardlifediary for the advise.

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