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porslin_princess
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The Love I Once Had May 12 2010, 07:02 AM

It was just you and I, Since that one phone call you made to me at the park Everything was great until we went to that party… I slipped away to clear my head and To get some air So finally I’m ready to leave… I go looking all around, From kitchen, to living room, and finally to the basement. Finally I find you with a group Of your friends Sitting there and laughing At the invisible things that aren’t there… You look up and see me An you know its time to go. Turning all around in the crystal night You stop and your Changed… A few weeks past after the party, You started to act differently ‘Cause whenever we had plans You always canceled them… Then I got less calls and texts from you. Here I am sick and tried… I go to your house To find you seeing more of your invisible creatures So now I see what is really important To you I pull you aside and try to talk to you But all you did was laugh So I got sick of it and ran out To the park you called me at Sat on the swing Slit my wrists Fainted… While hearing you say my name Holding me while stopping the bleeding… You screamed “I Love You” I died with a tear coming out…

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Bones
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May 12 2010, 08:44 AM

phat!

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porslin_princess
Posts: 21

May 21 2010, 07:19 AM

im sorry i dont understand...

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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365

May 23 2010, 11:48 AM

thats really good. you are a really good poet nice job.

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porslin_princess
Posts: 21

Mar 03 2011, 12:14 AM

thx...i try my best to put wats in my head into words...

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