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And we danced so close, we were teenage ghost, we were doing that gravyard waltz. And after all was said and done we were just too young to be doing that graveyard waltz. Graveyard Waltz Graveyard Waltz, by The Hooters

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Emo Pictures - porslin_princess
porslin_princess
Posts: 21
Lost and Confused May 21 2010, 07:24 AM
Lost and Confused My mind is slipping away Towards that unwanted zone In my brain Slowly I’m creeping My way in Back to those thoughts Of blood and pain, Back to those feelings of loneliness, Even though love is all around me. Back to those lonely walks Headed towards that empty doorway. Those thoughts are my weakness Because they are filled with dark Twisted hatred. I wish I had my light next To me because it always pulled me Away… Away it would pull me But what would happen if my Light started heading towards That darkness That it has of it’s own?

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Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
May 23 2010, 11:41 AM
you are really good at writing. keep it up ^_^
Emo Pictures - broken_wings21
broken_wings21
Posts: 13
Jul 12 2010, 06:38 PM
i really think this poem is good my fav lines were when you said "back to those feelings of loneliness, even though love is all around me" ^_^
Emo Pictures - porslin_princess
porslin_princess
Posts: 21
Dec 08 2010, 08:30 AM
thankz
TheBleedingDream
Posts: 101
Dec 08 2010, 10:40 AM
you put evrything too bluntly no offence hun but wheres the style
Emo Pictures - xxrainydaysxx
xxrainydaysxx
Posts: 43
Dec 11 2010, 11:00 AM
/likes. It's cool how you end it with a question =0

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