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I don't wanna live I don't wanna breathe 'les I feel you next to me you take the pain I feel waking up to you never felt so real Comatose, by Skillet

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Breezy
Posts: 336
The End Jun 01 2010, 10:04 AM
Life is but a dream, Just a sorrowful dream, See the joy it brings, When the death bells ring, When your life is swaying, Your perfectly laying, Your layed in the flowers, Under stone towers, Then it starts to rain, Rusting these old chains, The birds fly overhead, But your underground instead, You start to dissapear, Forgotten by your peers, No longer filled with dread, Now they can go to bed...

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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Jun 02 2010, 02:20 PM
you are a really good rhymeing poet. i cant rhyme to save me life T_T
Breezy
Posts: 336
Jun 02 2010, 04:33 PM
thanks, usually i saw myself as a bad rhymer. i guess i kinda got better at it when i started writing music.
Monster
Posts: 55
Jun 05 2010, 02:05 PM
I like this poem . . . it kind of draws you in but it's also kind of calm in a way too >.<

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