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TheBleedingDream
Posts: 101
What are your ideas my peers Oct 15 2010, 05:10 PM
here is a poem for deep thinkers it seems that now my pages blank do fill me so with glee i wish my words were to you what they were to me you see this poem about a girl is really about me and my love of my own world where my freedom is free a simple ryhme while in bed did come to me and thus this poem is somewhat born from my mind as all of these although my mind is vicarious i cannot see my way the plagues are like rats increasing day by day it seems that this is out of hand this poem has gone off topic ill retire back to my world so sunny and so tropic before i go please heed my warning in my world the plagues are still spawning and yes i am so young my mind is probably dead by now but his my song is sung i love my world its all i ask so please do not intrude you will see what ive become and then youll wish you werent so rude

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TheBleedingDream
Posts: 101
Oct 15 2010, 05:13 PM
i thought about this poem while i was so bored you see i like to speak in rhyme it keeps me all aboard do tell me all your ideas and what you think of this whether good bad or scary id agree with all my bliss do not ignore this comment for me being smart you see it isnt that at all im just gonna depart see rhyming flows naturally to me to you to them comment here please to boost my anxious phlegm
Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Oct 18 2010, 05:24 PM
i like it its really deep good job
Emo Pictures - xxxDeathKeiferxxx
xxxDeathKeiferxxx
Posts: 12
Oct 21 2010, 09:25 AM
i like this one,you're a one cool poet!!!

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