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This is for the kids with the beaten in lips Whose parents try to shut them up using their fists kids with beaten lips, by Beartooth

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Emo Pictures - LastUltimatum
LastUltimatum
Posts: 32
Death is a silence. Dec 27 2010, 10:09 AM
As time withered his life, he withered his emotions. He suffered to many times to live a decent life. Everyone he thought as friends betrayed him. He had nothing left to fight for. He started pacing in his room, dodging the mess he and his mom made in their argument. He always came to one conclusiion. He hated what he had come too. He thought of ways to aquire his "deal breaker" so to speak. He finally chose to take a gun from his grandmother. Nobody knew what was going to happen next, neither did he. All he knew was it was going to end tonight...he would make sure of it. He went to the main problem. His best friiend turned betrayer. He stood on his porch thinking of the coming conversation. He finally decided, he knocked on the door. When the other answered, out main character made one last move. He finally tasted a barrel, turned around, and gave his "best friend" a nice gift. A shower of brain matter. He finished their work. They pushed him to his edge and he fell. He sat at the gates of heaven, hopeing he isn't rejected here. Finally Saint Peter came to him. The conversed. Saint Peter decided to let him enter. He sat in Heaven...glad to be rid of the people who put him in his peculier position. He silently as he watched his funeral. 3 people showed up, not including his family. So even in death he felt alone. He turned to God and said "Why was it me that got pushed so far?" God replied "Because, my child, Angels belong in Heaven...They do not belong where they are not wanted." He smiled and looked back at his funeral..his wings appearing. He flew and flew...and finally felt happy.

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Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7232
Dec 27 2010, 10:17 AM
beautiful and deep poem <3 x
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1470
Dec 27 2010, 02:26 PM
it's interesting. But don't try this at home kids!
Emo Pictures - LastUltimatum
LastUltimatum
Posts: 32
Dec 28 2010, 09:08 AM
Thanks, and he's right. Don't try it at home.
Emo Pictures - JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
Dec 30 2010, 03:36 PM
So bittersweet :'') beautiful. I wanted to cry

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