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Vybz
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Lit via Love Jan 07 2011, 06:21 AM

Lit via Love* The night was starless Not a cricket chirped Not a cat grinned The street light dim- The road dark The path opaque Obscure the way- Yet- Two stars shone All alone That night- Two lovers smiled That night- Two hearts as one Illuminated the night. Their fire burned Like a candle light Like a phoenix fire Like a firefly- Electric- Their passion Stunning- Their love Static- Their embrace. Their combination Was like a constellation In the night sky. Stephen January 7 2011 © Lit via Love - Latin for love lit the darkness. ( I do not know if The Latin is accurate- I used Google Translate xD)

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TheBleedingDream
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Jan 07 2011, 09:48 AM

ahh very good sounds like something i wrote in my K days

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Vybz
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Jan 07 2011, 10:17 AM

Thx I waas trying to write a nice simple poem. However the meaning of the poem itself isn't that straightforward. What are K days tho?

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TheBleedingDream
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Jan 07 2011, 10:26 AM

urrm well i was hooked on the drug ketamine hence my K Days although strangely i like the song Special K by placebo about ketamine

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Vybz
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Jan 07 2011, 01:55 PM

that's a good song!

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Jan 08 2011, 10:24 AM

This made me smile a little :]

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Vybz
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Jan 08 2011, 10:38 AM

:)

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xSUICIDEBLOODx
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Jan 08 2011, 08:26 PM

Im speachless this poem went straight into the deepest and most sacred place of my heart :'] <3 x

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Vybz
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Jan 09 2011, 07:58 AM

aww I'm glad it touched you ^^

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