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XxXemocherryXxX
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FeAr oF SoMeThInG cOmIn' nEaR Feb 05 2011, 09:32 AM

"i feel it coming closer to get me . i hear it creeping behind me . i see its shadow sneaking there to surround me . i know its here just for me . its here and it came to kill me. in this cold night it follows me . it tries to catch me. im suffocating someone please help me ! i just stand there cuz i know it wants me. i cant do anything about it it will just find me. slowly i feel the touch of it stealing the soul from me . the devils of the night finally caught me. i feel them taking my heart outta me. i know now its the end of me . now i feel the breath gone from me . simply i just fall , die and life leaves me ."

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XxXemocherryXxX
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Feb 05 2011, 09:36 AM

no answers where ever revealed , yet i still search for whats real all the gates are sealed , but I'll never give up there is no fear its only dark no one's here , but still i know danger is near this night is too weird , i wish i was somewhere someone would hear . i see a sign saying "beware" , is something really there ? can it be a bear ? ha ha don't be silly " im not scared " . i stand there and just stare , i say out loud " life is not fair " i struggle and sit there not aware , and suddenly there is no air i die and its the end id say , but it wasn't supposed to be that way somethings wrong but i just smile and wave . it ends and i cant be blamed , on everything bad that has been framed . good bye , and that's how i die good bye , i say it and i know no one will cry good bye so long . words are useless they are now a lie"

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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
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Feb 05 2011, 01:24 PM

wow thats amazing

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Vybz
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Feb 05 2011, 01:41 PM

:) nice work!

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XxXemocherryXxX
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Feb 27 2011, 10:26 AM

thanks alot for the comment ^_^

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