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every breath you take, i watch you slip away. youre slowly killing yourself, i wont give in i wont give in, by Asking Alexandria

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eMoKiDfrmNorWay
Posts: 68
Her Last Breath Apr 14 2011, 12:29 PM
The red rose lays upon her coffin The coffin of the one that held my heart tight Shared the passing time, shared every passionate heartbeat My only wish is for her to be with me tonight Her lips, red as the dawn and a taste so sweet Let her lie in the bed beside me Hold her tight in my arms and just let everything pass by But the light i once saw, dimmed so fast I never thought, i'd have to take a last goodbye I never though this would be her last.... breath

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RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2153
Apr 14 2011, 12:31 PM
Thats realy really good :]
eMoKiDfrmNorWay
Posts: 68
Apr 14 2011, 02:04 PM
Thanks ;D
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xCrimsonAngelx
Posts: 57
Apr 14 2011, 06:46 PM
I really liked that :), thought it was great :)
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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18262
Apr 15 2011, 05:19 PM
Poetry has become such a big part of this site :)

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