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It's such a shame what I've become, after years of breaking down. My whole life has come undone, cause I'm trying to fake it all House Of Cards, by Madina Lake

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EyesXxLikeXxDimonds
Posts: 100
You See ( Please Leave Positive Or Negitive Feedback ) Apr 22 2011, 02:21 PM
YOU SEE YOU SEE I am not depressed…. I am always in thought and that is why my attitude is anything but expressive…. True I wear a smile on my face only every other Tuesday of the month…. But I see things clearly…. YOU SEE I am not the kind of guy that will draw your attention…. Yes I am bleak and sarcastic…. While others light up the room I stand in the shadows…. But YOU SEE…. the side of me that lights up a room isn’t for the world…. It is for you…. While sarcastic I never say anything thing to hurt you or anything I don’t mean…. And while bleak and dark…. You are the one that lights up my room and my heart…. YOU SEE while I am not perfect …. You make me feel that way when I’m around you…. YOU SEE I have hope…. Hope that even the darkest part of me can light up your soul…. That trying…. really is a fight worth fighting for…. That when you’re down…. I am there to lift you up…. YOU SEE I’m not depressed…. I’m just busy thinking of you….

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Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7232
Apr 22 2011, 04:51 PM
ohh i loved this, cuz kinda describes how i feel relating to a person i like (: x
nezzyneon
Posts: 896
Apr 22 2011, 04:55 PM
beautiful...your poems are truely inspirational pieces of work :D...wonderful job! keep up the good work :)
Emo Pictures - xCrimsonAngelx
xCrimsonAngelx
Posts: 57
Apr 23 2011, 07:10 AM
aww mann this is awesome. It totally made me just think of someone. I thought it was quite powerful ^^ Beautiful :D
MusicAddict
Posts: 2
Apr 23 2011, 09:13 AM
whoa....gud...! =)
Emo Pictures - EmoDancerLol
EmoDancerLol
Posts: 169
Apr 26 2011, 10:47 PM
I liked the word play with "YOU SEE" . I liked reading it.

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