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A Good Friend Once Told Me We Are Memory. Without Them We Equal Nothing. Remenissions, by Avenged Sevenfold

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Emo Pictures - Artykid
Artykid
Posts: 27
Ambitropin Jul 18 2011, 10:11 AM
When darkness drowns your bleeding heart, and tyrants tear your world apart, and none of it is making sense, it's all mistakes or accidents, We're all just players in a game, The strings are never pulled the same, and I have to make a change right now, but nothing changes anyhow, or any ways to change today, Seems fucking pointless anyway, and sympathy it runs so deep, and I can't even fall asleep, I'd be abysmal to presume, solutions to stave off our doom, yes, I mean our sudden soon to end, through all these fading times we spend, and when I think away on things I pissed, I'd ask to be writ off your list, no social skills no special price, I can only try to empathize, good memories held in my hand, through finger cracks they fall like sand, if only there were some to keep, I'd have to trade them all for sleep, and losing sleep adds so much time, the days can drag my bleeding mind, into a state of jagged shock, that twists and winds but never stops, and dreams are memories as well, and some of them read just like hell, if you could be my only friend, I'd cherish all the time we spend, and though we're so infrequent now, our hearts dance somewhere anyhow, so many make our lives seem cheap, and in the end we all must sleep, and endless flaming turning fire, the setting sun that rises higher, the beautiful bright blinding light, that never quite turns into night, our hearts can fly up freely there, our minds can breathe such precious air, to all my fine fair weather friends, good tidings are all I can send, I forgive you though you never knew, just what it was you put me through, and to all my enemies the same, your obsessions kept me in this game, and according to this life I've led, I should have lost more than my head, and on the edge that tilts so steep, I dream awake only of sleep.

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IloveGummieBears
Posts: 84
Jul 18 2011, 10:17 AM
:O Soooooo Awesome X) It's really good. like amazing. :D
Emo Pictures - Artykid
Artykid
Posts: 27
Jul 18 2011, 10:22 AM
Thanks! I actually like this one too haha. (I usually don't haha)
OnyxAngel
Posts: 834
Jul 18 2011, 10:23 AM
Another great poem that I can relate to. <--Insomniac :'( I like how you used Ambitropin as the title. That was creative of you.
IloveGummieBears
Posts: 84
Jul 18 2011, 02:12 PM
Your welcome, its amazing how you could make every line rhyme i have never been able to that
Emo Pictures - Artykid
Artykid
Posts: 27
Jul 18 2011, 03:10 PM
It makes me really happy to hear that you can relate Onyx and thanks again GummieBears. Don't worry about the rhyming. Some poems are better if they don't. :)
Emo Pictures - NeoBamBoom
NeoBamBoom
Posts: 3
Sep 01 2011, 09:54 AM
Wow... This was just simply Amazing. I'm in love with this.
Emo Pictures - Artykid
Artykid
Posts: 27
Sep 02 2011, 04:34 PM
Thanks! Nice glasses by the way.
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18262
Sep 02 2011, 05:19 PM
I love this!
Emo Pictures - Artykid
Artykid
Posts: 27
Sep 03 2011, 08:46 AM
Thanks man! =D

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