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Artykid
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Smile. Sep 03 2011, 03:11 PM

Overwhelmed with a deep repulsion for sights seen so commonly, now I have come to be the walking enmity. Assimilate into a culture of post morality, from what I've seen, I hate humanity. Rot with repulsion. I'll write the world a brand new story. Look upon your bleak creation, but is it truly me that's to be the human blasphemy? I'll set the world on fire and, in burning light I'll write my first love poem and I will feel warmth. Hide your eyes in heaven, in the lies. Believe. Relieve. I'll end the world tonight. Overwhelmed with a deep repulsion for sights seen so commonly, now I have come to be a walking enmity, for humanity, the human blasphemy, I'll end the world tonight.

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NeoBamBoom
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Sep 03 2011, 03:19 PM

Wow, I feel the hate. Just the fact that it's titled Smile makes it that much more powerful because there's no remorse. Good!

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OnyxAngel
Posts: 834

Sep 03 2011, 10:38 PM

Haha. I expected it to be a poem about love/friendship/'nice'. What an awesome surprise :D

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JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
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Sep 12 2011, 03:19 PM

absolutely awesome x

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nezzyneon
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Sep 12 2011, 04:42 PM

"I'll set the world on fire and, in burning light I'll write my first love poem and I will feel warmth. Hide your eyes in heaven, in the lies. Believe. Relieve. I'll end the world tonight." <---- I loved this part of your poem the most! :D great job!!! ^_^

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