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take this walk with me through the end of time when god chooses and people die when no more hearts will we have to sow when satin burns in the world below it not a song it a poem, by me!!!!!!!!

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Emo Pictures - emochild22
emochild22
Posts: 18
I Can't Feel Jan 12 2012, 01:37 PM
Consumed by the darkness above me, No light around for me to see, Blacked eyes and bloody shirt, I can’t ever escape this hurt, Bury me alive and I will suffocate, All of this I did not anticipate, Twisted mind with insanity raging, In my head a war is waging, Toss and turn with no great escape, Surgical knife and silver duct tape, Tided up with nothing but sorrow, I fear I won’t make tomorrow, Can I stop or is it my infection, Giving me no sign of affection, Blood turned black before I bleed, I’m bound to fail without succeed, Torn apart as the blood slowly runs, The weight on me is a heavy ton, Slice the skin before I can feel, I got the wrong end of this deal, Sorry my friend but I’m in deep hate, I want to be delivered into my fate, In too much pain to force a scream, This is my final step downstream, I’m far too lost to ever be saved, I longed for this indeed I craved, Caught in this endless ray of misguidance, I’ve had enough of your defiance, I lost my way somewhere down this path, Echoing voices just taunt and laugh, Tragic for me to end it like I did, Inside me I am just a stupid kid, Don’t try to help me anymore, I can end it so what am I waiting for, You don’t care about my dire health, You sold me out to save yourself, I take no pity on anything you’ve done, Too tired to fight and yet I run, I believe I have hit rock bottom, Remembering all that I’ve forgotten, The truth means nothing in my eyes, All I’m hearing are hidden lies, So just scream at me until you quit, Far too long I’ve taken all of it, Care no-more for what is true, I quickly fade to black and blue, Crushing my head upon the solid ground, Blood runs fast but I make no sound.

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Emo Pictures - 8DSilentTearD8
8DSilentTearD8
Posts: 36
Jan 12 2012, 02:12 PM
Thats really good :)
nezzyneon
Posts: 896
Jan 12 2012, 03:50 PM
wow, just beautiful.
Emo Pictures - EmoRazorBlade
EmoRazorBlade
Posts: 68
Jan 12 2012, 11:48 PM
Wow, thats really deep... Very good writing!! :]
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Jan 13 2012, 03:09 PM
Another amazing poem on here!!!
Emo Pictures - emochild22
emochild22
Posts: 18
Jan 14 2012, 11:46 AM
Thanks for the positive comments. I don't usually get this much likes about my poetry :)
lucy
Posts: 18
Jan 14 2012, 03:04 PM
I'm actually left speechless after reading this it really made me think.

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