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Emo Pictures - Kate
Kate
Posts: 4199
hospital Oct 05 2012, 02:38 PM
Double doors, swing to a close. trollies rattle all too close... a single beat. a deathly drone. peering faces. so alone. streaks of yellow. walls of white. endless corridoors greet my eyes, this souless night clinks of meatal. metalic taste. IV drip, swings in it's case ... how did I ended up in this god forsaken place?

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18262
Oct 05 2012, 05:12 PM
I like this and it's the first poem like it on here :)
Emo Pictures - Kate
Kate
Posts: 4199
Oct 06 2012, 07:54 AM
Thank you
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18262
Oct 06 2012, 05:11 PM
You also happen to have stunning eyes haha xD
zenia101
Posts: 219
Oct 06 2012, 05:12 PM
dude kate that was bomb ass! do u rlyy feel like that about hospitals or did u just write that? well either way its freaking awesome!!!!!
Emo Pictures - Kate
Kate
Posts: 4199
Oct 07 2012, 07:21 AM
yhea ..I wrote it from my experiances of hospital and my fear of them ... but thanks all the same
Emo Pictures - jessie-masscar
jessie-masscar
Posts: 2
Oct 08 2012, 04:13 PM
o my god i love this poem this is like amazing this has actually encoureged me to post some of my poems a little maybe ill think about it kinda a scary thought though
Emo Pictures - Kate
Kate
Posts: 4199
Oct 12 2012, 09:48 AM
you should post some of your poetry ..i'd love to see it ... thanks again

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