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You took it back How could you go and do something like that Greener With The Scenery, by The Used

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Emo Pictures - SilverDust144
SilverDust144
Posts: 22
Not of My Own Dec 15 2012, 09:13 PM
I've been feeling like this for a very long time and I finaly sat down and wrote this a few minutes ago. I would really like others opinions on this, so feel fee to comment bellow or message me. Not of my Own: Lonely and forgotten, Days filled with misery, No warmth can touch me. Everything blurs past, There is no bliss, No memories, No thoughts, No feelings, No me. I'm lost in this muddy picture, Forever frozen in the background. I can never call myself my own, Forced to be the way others want me, To feel what others want me to, To think what others want me to, To speak what others want me to, To act the way others want me to, I will never truly be my own. A robot, Of flesh and blood. No soul, No thought of my own, No voice, No feeling, No heart. A robot, Separated from my true being, Separated from my head, Separated from my Heart, Separated from my courage, Molded by another's hand. Bleak and gray, No way to stand out, I blend, Frozen into a background created by another. There is no hope, There is no love. There is only hate, Only sorrow, Only pain, Only misery. There is no freedom for a robot like me, For someone who had everything ripped away from them, For a person with no person. My batteries are ran dry, Only kept alive with a life support. My body is frozen and brittle, Only held together by nuts and bolts. Can no one see me? Can no one hear the bland message behind my tones that are not my own? Am I nothing? Am I forever more, Not of my own?

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WingedVenomXD
Posts: 123
Dec 16 2012, 05:59 AM
I like it :)
Emo Pictures - LillAngel
LillAngel
Posts: 2
Dec 16 2012, 11:01 AM
I truly love this poem. It actually explains the exact feelings I've had these past weeks. Ah, I just want to give you a big hug. *huggies*
Emo Pictures - SilverDust144
SilverDust144
Posts: 22
Dec 17 2012, 05:19 PM
Thank you both, and LillAngel, I'm sorry you feel the same way, I know I hate it *huggies back*
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18262
Dec 18 2012, 01:13 PM
I enjoyed it :)

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