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so keep my casket closed , your heart beats under the floor, it haunts me in my dreams , but nothings as it seems. when i go out....., by Escape The Fate

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Emo Pictures - damian
damian
Posts: 65
Unconditional love..... Feb 21 2014, 08:21 AM
unconditional love Once a happy couple, went to have some fun upon a hill. And as with every cheesy story, the woman forgot the pill. First the couple was shocked, to see what they had done. But they decided to keep it, and nine months later they had a son. The first few years were happy and filled with love and joy. As the couple went through great lengths, to do anything for their boy. The boy was happy and creative and also well dressed. And he soon started to notice he was different from the rest. And though he, could just accept this, his parents acted coy. And the tragedy unfolded, when the son brought home a boy. The couple started screaming how this was against their belief. And the son felt he went crazy, as he was drowning in his grief. Because the shouting just continued, every single day. Until the son just snapped and shot the things that were in his way. A family once so beautifull, now a family oh so thorn. As the mother laid down her dying head she whispered "you should have never been born". But the tale does not end here for there was one more thing he hated. So he took the gun and shot himself, in the heart that felt so jaded. The last one that was affected was the one whom by they were found. Because it was the boyfriend that saw them laying, on the cold and bloody ground. So the boyfriend took some paper and wrote his final words down. And the last corps, I promis, had a letter laying around. "I once said forever, but you gave up the fight. I guess you were trapped inside the darkness, to lost to find the light. And I was scared of living, when you were not around. So I'll still love you forever, even if that means loving you, from six feet under the ground".

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Emo Pictures - Kate
Kate
Posts: 4199
Feb 21 2014, 09:22 AM
<3 this especially the last few lines
shadesofcrimson
Posts: 1
Feb 21 2014, 11:07 AM
This is really good. You have an extreme talent there =]
Emo Pictures - damian
damian
Posts: 65
Feb 21 2014, 11:34 AM
Thank you so much ^_^ i am glad you liked it :D
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18262
Feb 21 2014, 02:31 PM
Damian - I loved it <3
nezzyneon
Posts: 896
Feb 21 2014, 06:56 PM
wow...loved every word ^.^
Emo Pictures - Shyemogirlx
Shyemogirlx
Posts: 6
Mar 05 2014, 06:03 PM
Amazing<3
Emo Pictures - Jestafy
Jestafy
Posts: 2
Mar 23 2014, 03:58 PM
I love this!
Emo Pictures - -ThisIsMyDarkSide-
-ThisIsMyDarkSide-
Posts: 8
Mar 30 2014, 01:25 PM
Amazing, actually made me cry. Beautiful - you are very talented

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