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If you call this winning why do I feel like a loser? Loser, by Falling In Reverse

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

That6metal6chick6
Posts: 127
Untitled Jun 19 2014, 04:41 PM
I wrote this yesterday, I don't really remember writing it. That's the beauty of memory loss. Ok hope you enjoy it I wipe the tears from her eyes Her bodies cold, that's no surprise I lean her down on the bed Like I would when she's done too much Whisper in her ear "you'll always be mine" Trying hard that I don't cry For all the times she said I'm fine Now I know it was all a lie I kiss her lips one last time Hold her body into mine Hip to hip, breast to breast With out her here I'm a nervous wreck Remember when we were watching the sunset You told me life sucks but that's fine, We have each other and that's all that we need To be serene for the end of time Well now the curtains closed the memories faded The look in your eyes is so outdated My heart has been expired But somehow our love can linger on In another world We're lying on the grass, holding hands Two broken girls, but perfect lovers Terrible for themselves but perfect for one another And if I try To mend my heart I might very well end up in your arms I suppose I can stay Without you But I don't know how I'm supposed to get through And in the future We'll be together once more High in the sky laughing hand in hand But until then I have to stay strong But my heart will never move on

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Macky07
Posts: 14
Jun 19 2014, 04:45 PM
I love it, that was just beautiful. Bravo indeed :)
That6metal6chick6
Posts: 127
Jun 19 2014, 04:50 PM
Thanks :3 that means a lot. Any ideas for a title?
BrokenPrincess
Posts: 45
Jun 19 2014, 06:03 PM
It's amazing!! I was thinking for a title something like love lasts forever or something along those lines :)
That6metal6chick6
Posts: 127
Jun 19 2014, 06:23 PM
I like that! Or "Love Last For(n)ever"
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Noxious
Posts: 2
Jun 20 2014, 08:20 AM
I like it "Terrible for themselves but perfect for one another " that's a killer line.
emo_is_what_I_am
Posts: 8
Jun 20 2014, 09:53 AM
That was so beautiful, each word was so meaningful. How on earth did you think of something like that, I would try but never could so thanks for posting your lovely words :)
That6metal6chick6
Posts: 127
Jun 20 2014, 03:35 PM
Thanks everyone!! And honestly, I'm not exactly sure when I wrote it let alone how I thought of it. Looking back I think I had a bit of inspiration from cellar door by escape the fate and little piece of heaven by A7x, the rest was all in my mind.
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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Jun 20 2014, 04:38 PM
Really enjoyed this thanks for sharing!
Eternalxox
Posts: 157
Jun 20 2014, 06:08 PM
This is great I lost a few people I loved to but it gets better took me forever to learn

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