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cold_corpse
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how you went Sep 18 2014, 09:31 AM

one more time I'm holding a knife bells will chime it's a farewell to life it's not a crime 'cause you wouldn't survive -------------------------------------- you said no what you weren't to say you had to go I had to send you away I looked at you and the sky went gray --------------------------- I liked how it went with a knife in your throat and how I left your body there to float i made a hole in your heart and blood came out i was sure from the start i had no doubt we were never apart but you pushed me out i had to watch it while you were going down ----------------------------- the two blue jewels your pretty eyes hanging from my necklace filled with lies i looked at the sky and saw a star whispered goodbye and you were that far ----------------------------- i would have visited you more often if only you had a coffin

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Sep 18 2014, 12:22 PM

I like this..

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cold_corpse
Posts: 15

Sep 18 2014, 03:03 PM

I know it's not good or deep or anything but it's the first thing I ever wrote when I was 9 and my family are still creeped out thinking I'd really kill someone . is it weird?

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Creepypirates
Posts: 11

Sep 20 2014, 06:56 AM

This gave me chills. The sensation of murder and how it happened. A different feeling from the sad love ones but as equally magnificent

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