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EllieNovak
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What do you think about this? May 26 2015, 07:50 AM

I wrote a song few days ago and I want to askwhat do you think about it and if you can check this for any mistakes. I will be grateful, cause my English is not very good. Sometimes when you speak to me I don't understand anything Trying to hear my inner voice Telling me what I'm doing wrong And maybe in the last scene You will know me better You will saw the signs what I'm giving you And maybe when I will drown in my own blood You'll understand that I love you I played hide and seek for my whole life Trying to get rid of emotions Trying to not die alone Trying to fix my heart Can you feel my broken heart? Can you take me from the edge? Can you take my feet back to the ground? I'm drowning, I'm drowning, I'm drowning, I'm drowning Baby, I'm drowning

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